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Almost there ^.^

In most respect its quite a good picture, a great idea and well executed.

Although the hair needs to be more defined. Think about the weight of the lines - thin, thick, narrow, wide etc because it seems like the darkest tones is the lineart for the eyes and the head/neck. So do the same sorta tone for the shadows in the hair, so it looks more refined. Plus the light reflecting off the hair is usually zig zagged slightly rather than a straight edge....but thats just typically speaking.

I have to disagree with the comment below by Hoboweasel, the mouth doesnt need to be any larger, but i would suggest have a slightly narrower shadow under the bottom lip. A nose wouldnt do that much difference either. It seems to work pretty well without. Well done, keep it up =D

drop-of-water responds:

Thank you very much :D and that was very good tips that you gave me :D:D:D

Question?

Are you crazy? =P

Something that size with a pencil, that requires a hell of a lot of patience =| How did you stick with it? I can understand/ appreciate your persistence and technical skill ^.^ well done

=O

This is to a way higher standard than most in the art portal ;P

Love the perspective, nice technique, how did you get the txtures on the floor and stuff? ....Now all you are missing is Gray Fox XD

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